Fucking Fabulous
Congrats, you're one of the best (if not the best) screenwriters on NG. That dialogue was bordering on Colbert-esq wit. I thought the animation was great (you absolutely nailed the keys, you just chose not to really inbetween at all). It was fun to look at and to listen to. Great jorb.
oh wow that's high praise, thankyou. I wouldn't say this writing is perfect, mind you. I think the satire isn't particularly biting - it's there, but it's buried a bit with some sloppy word choice - and I also think the final point got mixed with bipartisan jargon, so it strays off message a bit. Having said that, I'm getting better. Thanks for the review.
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